Where did i go wrong
Where did i loose myself
A part of me has died
Never again to see daylight
Somewhere deep inside me
The carcass lies frozen
The warmth of love its only cure
A breath of hope as its saviour
Look through me
Find me in my maze
For im lost in my own darkness
Never to be found again.
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u fianlly put this 1 up... hv been checkin in everyday but not seen a blog in a long long time... nice to finally c 1 up..
hey!
long time!
you write well, just not enough!
and if you are struggling to find something to write its probably because you have too many things in mind so you cant focus on one single aspect. i face that all the time but once a while, i do center in on one topic long enough to write something on it...take your time, you'll find yourself soon enough...
and as far as poems are concerned, try fitting them to a rhyme scheme, helps make it more lucid. they are pretty good as they are though!
writing is a bit like soul-searching so dont inhibit yourself while writing something, just let your thoughts flow...
carry on, i look forward to some more posts around here!
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